Hey guys. I just thought I'd show you what I've been working on lately. Here's a rough cut of our first documentary. Let me know what you think. I'm looking for any constructive criticism you can give.
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Larry, Carol, Brooke, Dean, Stacy, Lisa, John, and Kristi. All on one page.
The Cheesman Family
TidyChaos
- Hochstein Halloween 2015 - 11/1/2014 - Unknown
- A visit from Mary and Sarah - 10/26/2014 - Unknown
- Rock Creek Farms - 10/25/2014 - Unknown
- Hiking El Dorado Canyon - 10/16/2014 - Unknown
- Twelve Month Weston - 10/1/2014 - Unknown
Dean and You
- New Site - 3/5/2010 - dean
- New Provo Acoustic Sessions - 1/23/2010 - dean
- First 3d Test in Blender - 1/21/2010 - dean
- 2009 Wrap-up: My List of RSS Feeds - 12/27/2009 - dean
- 2009 Wrap-up: Top Albums I listened to in '09 - 12/25/2009 - dean
The Christian Crew
- Nash - 2 Years Old - 6/8/2016 - Unknown
- All About Nash - 1 Year Old - 4/21/2015 - Unknown
- All About Audrey - 1 year old - 4/18/2015 - Unknown
- All About Desmond - 1 Year Old - 4/18/2015 - Unknown
- Desmond - 2 Years Old - 8/19/2016 - Unknown
Forsyth Fam
- Third trimester - 1/29/2012 - lisa forsyth
- 2nd trimester - 9/17/2011 - lisa forsyth
- Viva Mexico! 12 weeks - 9/6/2011 - lisa forsyth
- Great News! - 9/1/2011 - lisa forsyth
- Typical... - 9/1/2011 - lisa forsyth
4 comments:
Very cool. The owner talks just like you, Dean. One thing I would change would be the lighting so you can see the faces of the guys you are interviewing. There were also a couple a transitions that were a little abrupt but other than that, it's great.
It makes me want to go there and see it for myself, so I guess you accomplished your purpose. I agree with Dad's comments and also, maybe it was my computer, but I couldn't hear what they said a couple of times. It looks good though! As a mom, I miss seeing you in the video!!
I thought that Cory was you at first. Even yall's voices sounded the same. I think it would be better to have more close-ups of the band instead of just the view with the crowd inside. Maybe try to get a shot from the stage into the crowd to show what it looks like? I really liked it though. I want to see a show sometime.
i concur.. good work.. the one blond couldn't spit out his words.. but what can ya do?! Hmm what else could i add.. maybe even have more of the venue and stuff on the walls and less of the guy talking about the decorations.. idk! but looks good.. i like the "A Sam and Dean Production"- very creative!
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